Monday, January 26, 2009

100 page update

Jermey goes to the police when he finds out that his friend was killed. He gives a written statement and does a lie detector test. The police belive that it was Aarons brother that killed him. And dispite all of the obvious evidence, like: 73 stap wounds, only two sets of footprints, and blood on the phone. Most people still think that Jermey is lying, and there was no possible way Nathan did it. It naturally doesnt make any sense, but with all the corroborating evidence it is obvious.

Within about a day Jermey and his family start to get hate calls. And not long after that people would egg, and vandalize the house. Jermey is afraid so he turns to his dad. His dad is divorced, and works security at the county courthouse. Jermey asks his dad for a gun to protect himself but his dad refuses to give him one, on the basis that it would be illegal, and they both would get in serious trouble. His dad aslo tells him everything that he has heard throughout the past few days. And he bascially tells him that no matter what he had said, the truth would have been discovered eathier way. This comfortes Jermey a great deal, and he is able to deal with all the pressures that have been placed apon his shoulders.

4 comments:

  1. Aight tomcat sounds decent might have to pick that up from you when your done

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  2. tom tom, Hannelore said you're floating face down in the Jefferson,and judging by how far you are on your posts im thinking it might bt true lol you better get on that man

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  3. So whats the setting of the story? And whats the deal woth Jeremys brother, is he like a psychopath?

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  4. Hey K da kid, I am afraid I may be right. He might be dead in the Jefferson. Doesn't look like he has logged on for a few days.

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